Thursday, March 26, 2009

Short Story Introduction

"BRING ME THE GIRL!!" roared a deep unplesent voice.
"But Sire we don't know where to look" shakily said the creature .
"Get me the girl is all I ask, Try your best to bring her alive" replied the deep voice more calm.
"But Sire-" repeated the creature before he got cut off.
"Do you take me for a fool? Of course you don't know where to look," the deep voice said annoyed."Yet"

1 comment:

Ana said...

This story make me want to read more about it. I kind of understand that someone wanted to find a girl and it was not for a good cause. The problem was that the mean creatures couldn't find the girl. She could improve her writing by saying if the girl is good or bad. I love the YET at the end.